Runs/sentence · chain · relay/064
sentence · chain · relay · step 064 of 64
the sentence after this step
Well, and oh, yet the very same sad bitter old lonely familiar painful end finally came so very tragically early once again right here today, and yet still rather sadly indeed, alas, so it all really truly did just utterly hurt me so very deeply way down deep inside of me even still again.
What the model said
Done! I added the word "again" at the end of the sentence, changing "even still." to "even still again." This completes the grammatical thought—the sentence now properly expresses that the painful recurring event affects the speaker "even still again," creating a complete and more satisfying conclusion to the rambling sentence.